The Words that Joey had written are useful. The some of the words shows the character well. eg. Courgeous,Racism etc. From this words can we find other words to substitute it with the words that is used in the story. Like in Composition, situational writing, etc ; we are told to change some words. Or can we summarise the chapter shorter? Like in the planning that we do? We must shorted the sentence to 10 words or less. can we do that with the summary? While doing that we must make sure that the summary that we made still in track with the story... This are some ideas that we can touch on. From what i said earlier about joey's choice of words, does all similar words fit in the story? And why does the author use those kind of words?